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Are you proud of me? by ~SanguineAngel:iconSanguineAngel:



Are you proud of me mommy?
I promise you I tried,
I tried so hard to make that flower,
Shine just like you do.
I picked it extra special and I didn't stop once,
Just to bring it home to you.
Are you proud of me Daddy?
I looked both ways before crossing the street,
And I didn't talk to strangers.
I helped a girl when she fell down,
Just like you said a man should.
Are you proud of me Teacher?
I passed my test,
I studied hard and worked real hard,
Just to get this A.
Just like you said, just like you said.
Are you proud of me, my friends?
I'm walking to the stage.
My diploma awaits me there,
And my hand is being shook.
Over eighteen years it's taken me to get to this stage,
But finally I'm making it...finally I'm here.
Are you proud of me, my love?
I try so hard for you,
And every day I try to prove how much I do love you.
I try so hard to give you it all, to put that ring upon your finger,
And have those kids with you.
Are you proud of me?
©2008-2009 ~SanguineAngel
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Basically my life...and what I've wanted my entire life...
for those I care about to be proud of me...
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:iconnuzzleplz: I think it's a great poem, sweetheart. *kisskiss* You're amazing.

And how could I not be proud of you?

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I'm proud of you too, yo uare amazing friend and I'm proud to call you my friend/brother. ^_^

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Wow, that really got me, man. Really moving. I can even see the change of syntax from innocent to mature, that in itself was simply amazing! :clap: Absolutely terrific poem.

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:tears: that's amazing......
and anyone who is not proud of you, is...is just ridiculous. I'm proud of all you've accomplished, and i'm grateful that you are my friend, and not only my friend, but my brother.

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:hug: I'm proud of you, more than words can express!

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"Can you still see the heart of me?
All my agony fades away
when you hold me in your embrace

Don´t tear me down for all I need
Make my heart a better place
Give me something I can believe
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:hug: I'm proud of you!!

Beautiful poem. Well written and thought out. Honestly, I had to hold myself back from tearing up. xD

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